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Colorless Paradise

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Hey there,
here's my third song produced with FL studio, I hope you'll like it.
If you have good suggestions to improve this song, go ahead and review ;)

Edit.: I worked out an intro, changed some synths and made little changes.

Have fun,
Fabyy

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Impressive work man :d

The bads:
-My first comment would be your mixing, there are some points where it sounds muddy, you should do more equalizing and compressing, but you're still starting out so these things will flow in slowly :)
- It's lacking a clear structure, I'm not one to talk about this, but I'd like to see a clear breakdown/buildup.
- The transitions are a bit lacking, but this is partly due to the comment above (no clear buildup etc.)

The goods:
- The atmosphere is I think what you tried to achieve... has that "techno-ey" feeling which is great!
-Catchy melodies, would make one want to listen to this many times!
-Despite the mixing, I loved the percussion used! Energetic and everything ^^
- Synths and leads you used were extremely fitting and well-thought out
Around 1:21 is my favourite part

Keep at it :)


Fabyy responds:

Thank you so much for the review! I'm gonna try to keep it up even though the next 2 weeks are my last in America.
My mixing is really poor, I know that and I'll try to get it better over time :D
I still need much practice with buildups and stuff, I'm gonna see what I can do there in my next song.

Anyways, thanks for the review and your awesome song you uploaded today!
Greets, Fabyy

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Fabyy
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618
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32
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Score
4.45 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 2, 2013
12:43 AM EDT
Genre
Techno
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4.5 MB
3 min 55 sec
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