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i dont know what kind of beat you could call this but hope you like

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nice

i like the beat :) its really good and i think this would make it in its own catagory hehe :)

yo this is nice

you mind if i use this beat ? pm

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Jazz that

Pros: piano Sounds like those Friday nights. You got me there.
Cons: Saxaphone sounds so dull, give some more echoes to it
Panning is pretty unbalanced. Use it slightly, Not all the way.
Alight, a 4/5

Review---

I have to first gripe about the panning. It was just "arrrgh" to me. There's probably a reason there's 2 speakers. Well, the panning here makes me feel heavily unbalanced. I just never can get down into because panning. The drums in particularly aren't very diverse in execution and the cymbal/hihat you use just hits as a metronome which is never really good per say considering other instances of this song do the same. The drums around 2:00 minutes also aren't very intriguing. Around 2:12 or so when the keyz come on they seem to battle with the initial keys and generally alot of the sounds you used didn't work well together. This song could have been so much deeper with different sounds and better percussive interpretation.

Plus----11
(+)Chords are generally nice in there movement.

Minus---6
2x(-)That panning is horrible. Just balance it. Panning is to be used slightly.
(-)Percussion needs more variety and kicks need to engage better.
(-)Transitions. Where are they?
(-)Battling Melodies are never good. Balance is key. HIGHLIGHT what needs to be heard.
(-)Ending was um. Fishy. Balance was also. Pads seemed loud over other sounds.

Final Score 5 >>> "I can tell you this track needs more work."

It's a jazzy beat

Other than a nicely put track, these are my thoughts here:

- Prior to the 2 minute mark, I think you overused the panning. I found it annoying, but that's just me.
- There are parts that felt choppy. I'm guessing the panning had something to do with it, or at least it exposed the choppy parts.

^_^

Myheaven-420 responds:

ok cool, well i will keep that in mind with whatever song im making next, thanks for being honest and lettin me know whats up.

peace

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Downloads
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Score
4.14 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jun 15, 2006
11:35 AM EDT
Genre
R&B
File Info
Song
3.2 MB
3 min 27 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.