You're on the right track, but it feels like your falling in between some Mark Hamill and Heath Ledger; stuck between natural and over-dramatic. If I were you I'd try to go for either all the way, even at the risk of sounding ridiculous. Just keep doing it and have fun doing it.
I believe I have become skewed between the dark version of joker and the joker from my childhood XD grew up watching the old haha laughing joker. So kinda hard to kick him out to read from a more dark script :P But thanks and will do! I dont mind trying to poke a try at other character either so if you have any in mind i might fit lemme know!
It could have been better, but either way, this is the step in the right direction.
It can always be better ^.^ but it is my take on it, and how I would have sounded as the joker to my best extent right now. Anywho thanks for the review! :D
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