i'll help you with this .
get a real good VST drum like addictive drums or EZdrummer . and plug directly your guitar into your computer instead of puting a crappy microphone in front of your amp . practice more . you'll get great . and add some bass .
um, ok. pracitce more, turn up guitar
heres the deal i think you're song suck's but maybe you should start woth a song that people will like that you are 110% sure you can play flalessly and after you show me you can play with skill i dont care what you do to songs
plz, dont screw babbath
learn how to play before u do this crap
your timing's a bit off and it's a bit too quiet, but otherwise good effort. just listen to the actual song by 'sabbath and you should get the idea
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.