Dude, you got some wild composition skills. I could hear a few passes into melodic minor which was a nice little variation on the scale. I think your strongest attribute would have to be the layering. You seem to know your way of spacing the material so within each beat there is always room to hear another instrument.
I know it says demo so I'm marking you at a 5 / 5 for your composing, really REALLY well done.
On another note I would really loved to of heard a bass guitar in this though.
And the guitar tones. As a fellow user of poor recording equipment I understand this issue as well. The guitars tones are too muddy which makes it a deciphering nightmare. When using any EQ, Think about where each instrument focuses on the frequencies. Too many overlapping will cause dB distortion among other un-wanted things.
I really want to check this out again when you finish it.
Definitely really cool, I could see some vocals in this. I got that sort of Black Dahlia Murder vibe on this one. Speed metal, and what not. The guitar solo was pretty impressive as well. Keep it up man! >:)
For a "Demo" piece this sounds pretty fuckin' complete to me. There is no need for lyrics what so ever in my gods to honest opinion. Everything flow's so well, and the rifts by them self scream LISTEN TO ME NOW BITCH! lol!
I had to listen to this about 4 times before I decided to download it :P Excellent job!
Thanks! I guess I just critique myself to heavily. haha. I'm glad you like it as an instrumental! One day I'll have the version with vocals up, cause it's pretty awesome all together. :P
This is awesome!
This gave me chills down the spine. When the tapping came in followed by the chords, dude that's some excellent song writing there. Great job man. :)
Thanks tons man. :) To hear my music had an effect like that. I feel honored. ^_^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.