"Nights to Ignore" by KirbzVA*
Comments: There was a small bit of dead air/static haze behind everything. The Irish (or Scottish?) accent was off. I Got lost a bit among the voices constantly switching. There was a little bit of trailing off and mumbling making a few words hard to understand. I would have liked to have heard more enthusiasm with several of the voices. The nerd had the most energy, but the lisp made some words hard to understand. I Would have kept it to less voices to make it a bit less confusing. I really liked the themeatic music based on the story being told and the unique way of using the theme! The Nerd Was my favorite voice. Overall, this was pretty good. I would work on your diction, kick up some of the voices, and look into some good sound removal for that background haze.
Awwww you trying to get me to read? Hee hee hee hee hee. Casey made me feel fuzzy inside and I just wanted to cuddle him while nerdy guy really brought out some annoying antagonism to the piece, and it's always a good job to create a character that one just has to hate. As just an initial first listen through, I was confused as to who was who...were there really only 5 friends? When so many opinions were being thrown around, I couldn't tell who was who. I guess especially since the plot of this piece was not so much one story but a discussion of different stories trying to make their way through. So a little cluttered but upon further thinking you do keep them divided in some way. Perhaps some more focus on dividing the ranges would help that too. But I think overall it's pretty cool. Nice ending hahahaha.
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