Your classical-pop style is always interesting- you have a lot of good ideas both from a more classical background and a more pop background, so it's neat.
Something to consider working with in future works from this is a certain "main melody" and other melodies that form up a piece in a sort of structure, where one idea comes and goes into another, but some of the same ideas are still there. Too much variation and the listener will get lost! Too little (like many pop songs) and they will be bored to tears! It is a hard balance to find. :)
Makes me think the title is White Knight. You need to complete this song. Add more structure and moments of greatness to it. You may even get a higher rating from me on the next review. ;-) It's promising to be honest.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.