This humor is filthy. I LIKE IT! :D I'm looking forward to seeing alot more of this!
All I will say critique wise is as someone who is British it sounds like your trying a bit hard to portray an accent on a few of the words but that's better than not knowing your putting on a accent at all! Or mistaking it for another nationality! Watch out for those yells too! Anyway though! I listened! I laughed! I love! Mmyyes, Very good, cherrio and whatnot!