Are you sure? This music isn't any good because it's so generic. If it's fine and arranged well, it's too generic. It's soulless, it's hard to listen to if you want to hear music for the flow or image that a genre puts out there.
That makes it worthless.
I have no idea what's up with the biases in the previous 2 posts - they're examining your song very subjectively, ignoring the fine production and arrangement. If I had to criticize I would say that the sound /is/ quite generic, but the flip-side is that this genre is very hard to master correctly and you've done a good job.
I'd rate this 4/5, but since there's 2 idiotic zero-bombs on it I'm gonna say 5/5.
Thank u 4 your review & votes!
I could sworn I heard this yesterday. And the day before that. And the year before that. The sound always comes from a toilet, and I sometimes hear shitty lyrics.
If I could put good lyrics in your song, this would be them.
"Give me your love and virginity! We'll make love better than a trinity, connected as long as I want and I'll call it eternity! I'll cheat on you, so lets get on with the pleasure and pleasantries!"
But your song would friend-zone these lyrics like the girl and the dick.