First Chip-tune? Not bad!!!!
I love the effects you did in this using the swoop. It works well with the song, and makes for an amazing beat! Woop!
The ending probably could have been worked on a bit, as there is always room for improvement, but still I liked it, in fact I thought it ended the song quite well. The use of panning on the end was quite brilliantly done! I personally enjoyed this. I wish you luck with the contest. I'm actually quite curious who the winners are going to be tommorrow.
For a first time making chiptune I gotta say this is impressive! Really like the dance feel, also the static percussion is nicely mixed in
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.