I found your youtube channel and end up here.
I think the track is awesome but perhaps the build up is too simple to really bring the climax at it best. For instance you could layer the main lead with another one and then play with a frequence filter (think about the cuttoff of the lead ). Also what about a saw bass in the intro, next you could put a frequence filter on the breakbeat build up (its sound awesome) ...
Anyway, overhaul the track is good but it could be better with a bit more work.
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