This is good, contrary to what treviabot92 said.
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It's an okay mix, considering...

I've never heard the original, but this sounds like it'd be a good mix. I admit, some things are annoying, but you can't have art without imperfections. Keep on truckin', my fellow artist.

No effort here whatsoever, I swear...

This did not sound good at all. I could tell you are (or were) just getting started with FL Studio, but it really takes talent to make something this bad and make it seem like you think it's the greatest in the world, whether or not that really is what you think. The drums don't flow properly, and in fact, there are almost no drums at all. It's two different synth snares, or perhaps a snare and a kick. The piano's just plain annoying. The guitar has none of the basic effects applied to it that it could've had, which even I had known about when starting out. The synth sound is even more annoying than the piano. There's no effing bass. Need I go on?

This could've been so much better if you had just worked at it. It also would've been better if you had taken a look at all the stuff that FL Studio had, experimented a little, THEN made the song with a few tweaks. Making a lot of stuff in a short time isn't a bad thing per se, but moderation is key to success here; no moderation means that, in general, skill will not develop.

By the way, I happen to know what I'm talking about. I've made crap, I knew it was crap, and I still submitted that crap, so they have a crap score and crap reviews. You want proof? Just take a look at my audio section, and you'll see plenty of crap in my first year.

wooooow

imagen
a great fight between kirby and dedede with this song!

Cool

Really gives the feeling of 8-bit and guitar. Would you possibly know where I could find simple sheet music for this song?