Nice battle
Wow I have to say these verses are pretty good I have only heard a few but they are geat and can be funny at times but your battles challenge each other to do better and it does come out very well so I was pretty impressed with these I think as a form of improvement maybe you could even go or more verse just for fun even but anyways really nice work here and hope to hear more from you
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More added verses
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