I started bobbing my head, then I looked at your avatar!
lol, on a serious note, the song is built quite well, and while I can hear some tension in some parts, I do notice there is no build up to that tension, or really anything in relation to that. However, IMO this song is a great listen.
Thank you for listening! I wish I could edit it more, I just rushed it out because I was eager and nervous for the contest, but ah well what can you do. Thanks for the critique.
Good as an individual track, but let's be honest: I don't see much of a "tension" or "climax" rising at any point. D: It's pretty much what JJM said about the chord progression.
Good luck to the contest :)
I definitely disagree with the song not having "tension" or "climax", but thanks for the criticism.
Not bad. Good choice of instruments and effects. The only thing real lacking is the repeat of the same chord progression throughout the song which gets boring after a while. Also the mixing needs to be slightly worked on to bring out all the instruments. Panning, using a Parametric Equalizer etc would help.
Good job anyway.
Thanks for the feedback! I was afraid it was a little repetitive, I had some trouble with my DAW and I couldn't master or change the song around without it killing FL, but anywho. Thanks for listening, amigo.
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