I definitely think the melodic synth could use some tweaking. Also you had a great idea, what you needed to do was add some more to the original song. Another verse, bar, hell even a transition into the same/different thing. Downloaded +1. First song of yours I've heard, starting to listen to others now.
you're right, the main synth was basically a preset that i put very little work into, i just wanted to get the idea out as fast as possible, thats also why it didn't really have much else in terms of another verse or anything. I'll try to focus on getting more complete ideas out there. Thanks for commenting and listening!
Good. The downside is that bass section kinda undeveloped. And that melody is a bit too much an ear razor. Not fits the calm power it could be here.
I was definitely struggling with the melody synth, haha. Thanks for listening and giving me feedback!
That was incredible!
While I do feel that the bass could have be a tad bit stronger, I absolutely love how this was put together!
Keep doing what you do!
Thanks! you're right about the bass, I kind of rushed this track which is not a good thing haha, but hopefully I'll make more stuff like this in the future. Thanks for listening!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.