Sounds good already. I didn't notice the discordant note SirCumferens was talking about. I mean there are a lot of discordant notes in here, but I assumed they were all on purpose because the song has to sound sad. I do hear a slight click right at the beginning of the song. The strings sound very nice in this.
It's great so far, thought I heard a dischordant note at 1:48.
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