Almost!
Your song takes a little too long to start up. I would reccomend 1 bar earlier. 1 bar is 4 measures, btw. I'm only telling you because I've told that to other artists and they told me I was crazy.
The music is also a little slow for my tastes. It's all there, it's just too slow. The intro was about right, but when the melody dropped, it was a little monotonous. However, the melody was extremely solid, and I loved the way you managed to mash these two different songs so well. An impressive feat, considering how different they are originally.
A little more work, and you will have a front-page, daily 1st winner on your hands. Just pump it up, make it faster.
LazyBucks 
