Diversity - There is a theme here.
Again I hear good things, but this time i'll emphasize that you seriously need to diversify, maybe mix some of these single loops into themselves or at least change the rythem every once and awhile.
I was feelin dis a lil bit. i had to listen to it like 2 times though to get a feel for it. Dis is really easy to rap off of too. imma make some lyrics and see what i come up with. if i have any luck ill send the lyrics to you on aim. Dis is good but it could be better. the bass can be much louder. so could the melodies. dis is tight mayn.
thanks for taken the time to listen to it a second time. You can put lyrics on the beat as long as I get credit for the beat I don't care. I make music for the artist like you man.