This was interesting I think you need to ad more of a realistic voice not the automated one we hear now, and this could be much longer.
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Something else besides the automated voice thing.
If the critics knew what they were doing they would notice that this was actually the end of the FF series.. why else was it called The Last Story, had the same people working on it and even Nobuo...
I enjoyed the game very much with the new mechanics, good move for a finale. Don't you agree? :o