That's a nice song. Well composed. I think some instruments could've used more distortion to give a more interesting sound. Especially the base guitar. The Base drum could've been heavier. The snare a bit deeper and longer. The orchestra hits sound quite good very old-skool/retro. I like the breaks.
Thanks! I see your point, I just don't want it to be too distracting (it's for a video game). :)
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