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FD - 3'33"

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Flashbacks of memories I never had,
Lost in the shores of my stranded mind
Like I never find...
Like I never find...
What it's like to be...
To exist and breathe...
To be glad and be sorry to leave,
As my thoughts come back and I can't foresee

In my aimlessness,
I lose touch and the ground becomes formless
Like I never find...
Like I never find...
Melting horizon, colorless...
Whispers in unison, abstractness...
Crowded minds...
Crowded minds...

Convoluted, mental chaos...
Abstract foam of my surreal existence
Mapping with my eyes patterns in the distance
Broken glass... False persistence
Mirror, mirror show my lost innocence
Mirror, mirror show my lost innocence
Like I never find...
Like I never find...

Let me wait for you...
Let me wait for you...
Desiring warmth as my heart is cold...
I've got no more fears to hold...
While illusions keep haunting me like stories untold,
For the reasons I want you are starting to unfold
Dawning dreams, coated in gold...
Abandoning consciousness, let me wait for you...


It's pretty and ominous. I like the lyrics themselves, but also the whispery voice you used for the lyrics. I feel like sometimes the instruments overpowered the lyrics, and the transition at 2:10 was a little sudden for me, but excellent choice of instruments and I love the mood. I have to say: I think fade-out endings are rarely interesting. Maybe it's fitting for this piece, but I encourage you to find a more creative way of ending this track. Overall, it's a well-structured piece with a lot of substance, an engaging and haunting moodiness to it, and a minor pacing issue. Great job! ;D

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ForgottenDawn responds:

Thank you for your helpful advice, I will keep that in mind for future tracks

i think this is real cool stufff. nice three sections there, the last one had nice chord choices or whatever. very very nice. it is pretty Miscellaneous tho lol.

ForgottenDawn responds:

Thank you

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4.39 / 5.00

Mar 9, 2013
8:08 AM EST
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8.1 MB
3 min 34 sec

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