dude, this is really awesome. i'm really glad i came across this song, but i'm really surprised this doesn't have alot of views. i agree with what gadogry said though, could use a bit of a better ending. also, idk if there really is a sudden stop in the middle of the song (0:46) or it's just my computer, but if it's there i'd take it out.
by the way, are you recording the song actually playing it, or using some kind of software or site to make the song. if you're using a software or site, can you tell me what it is?