Raw

This has major potential. Seriously.

The deep piano is really off key. It's completely off. Although the melody has been used before, it's hot. The piano that comes in gives it an old skool rock feel. I'm likin' that. Also, the drum pattern was a lil' cheezy. Work on this a lil bit man and you'll have a hot one. Keep it up.

Real muthafuckin' talk
~Holla~