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How do I say, it's lacking a certain Rhythm. The piano sounds nice...but not...quite...there yet. The notes are slightly off, you gotta get it in Rhythm. The percussion seems fine though, I love it. This would be very calming and easy listening if the piano was a lil' better. Other wise, great idea. As it is, it's a bit disorientaating, however don't let that discourage you. It's not bad. I'll listen to another one of your songs.

Keep on keepin' on!