That was absolutely beautiful. Granted, it could sound better as the Sibelius 6 sounds don't have the professional feel that something like EWQL has, or even Sibelius 7 default. However, what you composed was very nice to listen to, had a good buildup and different acts, which is always nice to see in a modern classical composition. Overall, I enjoyed it very much.
its pretty good =) haha check my song life XD
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.