The mix was too powerful for rhythmic elements that felt not powerful enough. This is worse than the mix being not powerful enough.
The sounds were kind of all over the place. They were individually good, but didn't make sense in context of each-other.
Definitely try to add more variations to the kick snare patterns. That boom psh boom boom psh got old real fast. Like, two bars fast. Really bad.
Around 2:43-3:00 (Most strongly at the beginning of that time-frame) there were some very interesting harmonic and tonal dynamics between the instruments that I feel like should have been expounded on much more! A whole track could come out of the focus of that one, Surrealistically deep sound.
I completely understand what you mean and where you're coming from with that. Although I'm happy with the track as a whole (personally) ill keep your advice in mind for the future! thanks :D
I wish i could get more reviews from people like you! Very helpful. Constructive criticism is a lost art.
Lmfao i was hella drunk when i wrote this