That's some pretty messy production there mate. The bass is all over the place frequency wise, the drums are flat and dead, everything is mono...
I'm mentioning it because you did in the description.
You should try panning the high instruments a bit and using some EQ to fix frequency clashes. Kick drums should sit below 100hz and bass should ideally be cut away below 100hz and not be too present above 300hz. That should get you started on cleaning up this mix.
ahh thank you dude! I pretty much have no idea where to start with bass i tried the best i could by cutting the mid and boosting the bass and highs but i really have no idea what to do with bass for this kind of music. Thanks for the advice man I will upload another anyway, was thinking of looping the guitar track so its more dead on aswell.
I don't know, but something sounds wrong in this song. I think its the timing and the guitar.
Ahh it might be the bass, ill go have a look!