Nice voice guv, slow down on the lyrics; unless of course you're gonna bust into a nice little mini-rap that flows smoothly with it, the second fast-lyric thingy was better though. The percussion sorta felt right, sort of like an impromptu musician assisting a lament on the side of a building in spreading his world. Overall, pretty damned good.
Nothing new or interesting, but being a musician, I appreciate the skill and practice this takes.
You also have an adorable voice.
Your user name is also very dark and relatable and I love it.
5/5 because you deserve it.
3.5/5 because you have a lot of room to improve.