Maybe too strong right at the very start.
Nevertheless it was really awesome!
I loved the abnormal rhythm at 0:25
And even more so that it faded out to just drums, and it was excellent the way it came back in.
Ending was too soon, and the track was too short.
Would have benefited from a "B" section to compliment the main melody.
Could have been mixed better. Too much kick drum, I think.
Wow, Thank you for actually giving me a strong very detailed review, I am definitely going to take everything you said into consideration and hopefully make a better drum n bass next time. I appreciated the time you took to listen. Thank you very much.