this is way too fast and too high pitch.
Nice intro, but it hits the high freq way too much and makes my ears bleed. I hear some high energy stuff here. But the problem is how badly it's set up. At 30 secs into the song, you get ready for a build up, then stop, and kick in a horrible gated synth. You might want to focus on cleaning the mixdown up, I'm not into high energy hardcore trance. It's alright I guess.
Production wise, it needs some polishing.
Thanks. I though the build up would piss some people off. lol.