Three Gripes...
1) The intro was a little excessive...and your build-up may be flawless, the lead drowns out your drums.
2) Some rifts have little "flavor" to them and are excessively repeat more than I expected. *
*) While this may have been your intention, it gives your piece an overly anticipated feel up to 2:22
3) Your drums are extremely quiet.
Other than those three issues, I enjoyed the melody.