1) The intro was a little excessive...and your build-up may be flawless, the lead drowns out your drums.
2) Some rifts have little "flavor" to them and are excessively repeat more than I expected. *
*) While this may have been your intention, it gives your piece an overly anticipated feel up to 2:22
3) Your drums are extremely quiet.
Other than those three issues, I enjoyed the melody.
This is pretty good shit, man. I like your guitar tone. The drums could be brought up a little bit through, my only rub. 5 star, 5 vote from me. Rock on, broski
Hey thanks, man! You should check out the one with vocals on here. It was from the full-length release... I'll be re-releasing it with better VSTs shortly, when I put out the new album! :)
corrosive... I like it!
Thanks dude. If you like this, you should check the rest out! facebook.com/metalofnerds
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.