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Gmon Outta This


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This is just a quick little rap that I did on my iPod with the app by 'Smule' that is called 'Autorap'. I do not take any credit for the beat. All I did was freestyle some lyrics. Hope you guys enjoy my novice rapping skills! I hope to work on my delivery and stuff like that so any tips would be helpful. Thanks!
Gmon beating up this track tonight yea I'm first to fight, but last to die on this bullet riddled night oh shit do ya fight or flight bitch i got ya in my sights but now I show these n***as how to ball standing on my wall n***as fuck y'all. you know i get it all so get that dough so my bank never folds, I show you how we go. I didn't have much time but I thought I'd drop by and bust a little rhyme. Now I'm super fly, higher than the sky, that's the limit i told you boys that I'm in it to win it and that's how i think I'm gonna end this shit, suck on my dick, Gmon found the door and now he's walking outta this bitch.
(Sounds best in earphones, sorry if my voice is a little hard to hear.)

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Lamazar! Good rap, nice bg music! Keep at it man! Can't stop at one. Sounded great jus need a lil more punch in the vocals. Almost monotone, but everyone does that on their first try. I still have a hard time putting emphasis in words which is why I've never released vocals lol. But you got it for sure. Cook up some more lyrics, I wanna hear more! Later man!

It's alright, but I just didn't like how there was just no emotion in your voice. Other than that, you should spend a long time writing our lyrics and devote your time to it, because in the end, you'll get results that you and everyone will love. Mabelma also makes an excellent point. Story raps are just... better, like they actually have a meaning, and aren't just random words and swears thrown together :P. Anyways, it was alright, and you should keep doing rapping, if you really love doing it!

For a freestyle it's pretty nice. I suggest you stay clear of the egotistical rapping, try and tell a story with your rhymes rather than just saying, "I'm great, I'm great, I'm great" It makes for better songs in my opinion. Apart from that there's not much else to say, seeing as it's only a freestyle I can't actually judge your rhyming but keep going mate, and keep posting for sure, don't stop.

Lamazar1 responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate this review. I'm glad you didn't vote down on me too much and understood that I was just saying the first things that came to my mind that kind of sounded similar lol. I'll take your advice when I actually sit down to write a song and maybe soon will start even making my own beats to flow with. If you have any more suggestions PM me and we'll talk some time.

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Feb 6, 2013
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