wow bro i like it. Did you work with some scale in specific?

keep going you're doing it great.

It's cool, fast yet slow, soft, and hard, smooth and rough. It's every thing that's hip and chill man. You do good on this, hope to hear more to come, love it. Don't disappoint.

You fixed the drums.
Now it's nearer to perfection.

Though I believe the background and foreground are too balanced, they're clashing a bit.
And the drums seemed to get offbeat somewhere in the start for a moment.
And the guitars seemed shallower/drier than the original.
Nevertheless, an immense improvement. Good job.

i liked more the last one, but nice anyway.