This song is great however the music drowns the vocals. I think if somehow you were to tone down the music or turn the vocals up a bit it would help. Cool song anyway other than the music being too loud.
i dig this one too, but something about it feels a little empty. the instrumental breaks and repeated choruses probably translate better when you're in the circle pit, but recorded like this it seems drawn out.
Actually, listening now, I agree. The reason is because it's one of the first songs I ever wrote when I didn't realise that you should probably have different chord progressions throughout the songs. The way it is, the bass and guitar could pretty much play the same thing the whole way through. But it works well live, so oh well.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.