Needs abit more
~REVIEW~~
Ok so this seemed abit too loud, you may want to tone it down just a tad, it wouldnt take anything away from what you are trying to acomplish it just needs to be more clearer and when its that loud it muffles up the tune itself, so this is the first thing i really noticed, but also its the main issue with this as all, and an easy fix i would think, The track it self is actually pretty good and i enjoyed but again too loud you can even hear abit of {STATIC} and im sure im not the first to tell you this, but to be honest this was really the onlything on this that bothered me, but other then that its a good tune.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As said just moments ago, have it redone with not so loud sounding, doesnt have to be soft but try and do it so there is no static after sound, cause that just seems sloppy.