I liked the melody work here, the arpeggiated notes worked well in giving off an adventurous feel, those string chords that came later NAILED that image home. If anything, it were those string chords that finalized the image, and made the songs description true.
The percussion in this song was a tad weak, it is my only complaint. While the strings were playing the snares, hi hats, and claps disrupted the flow of the piece. I would also highly recommend reverbing those percussional notes as they do tend to perform better and sound more realistic when done so.
You've got great melody work in this one, again it was just the percussional stuff. Otherwise, I hear some pretty good potential in you!
Keep up the good fight! Keep them coming.