well making your own instruments is something that is pretty hard and i have the feeling that they can sound much better because they are still a bit basic. so i would suggest u to work on your instruments. not trying to be a faggot just trying to help u here because i know makeing your own sound from scrach is pretty hard work.
progression was a bit wack but the melodies where good.
Keep it going!!!
Thanks for the review. Im still pretty new to this. Im trying to get more instruments.