I'll be interested to see how this turns out once you have finished it.
I was thinking about a geting a guy with a real guitar to cover some parts for me ;D
"Do you want me to complete this?!" Sure. The intro was a bit long for me, but once :52 kicked in, I was with you. I hope that your kicks have more balls in your completed work, but you've got a good start.
more balls? Or more DB? :D
It has a good beat and rythm, but I wouldn't say this is your best.
What is my best?! :D
I think that this is good.
However, it could do with a little more flavour.
Add another instrument to emphasise the "Rave" element.
You've got the "Stein" part down to a 'T' though.
"Possibly a guitar of some sort?" suggested The Other Other God
Stop stealing my goddamn thoughts directly from my goddamn brain!
Althought I'm glad that I'm not the only one seeing a guitar add as a possibility.
Your mixing is pretty good, but the songwriting doesn't match up, really. I'd say try to organize it a little better.
Ye I'm still bad at both ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.