Beat is cool. I like dat bass(did you make it?). Great lyrics too! You've got a good voice for rap I methinks. But maybe they could be mastered to be more audible? I can tell they sound good but sometimes they're hard to hear over the beat. Otherwise, man, for "taking a crack at it" this is fucking tight. make more!
Yeah I made everything in this song ( bass included), I know what you mean with the volume of the vocals, I kept them a little low so you can hear the song a bit better and I spent a fair while on the orchestrals and I didnt want to cover them up heaps with my rapping.
Cheers fore taking the time to leave a comment man, really appreciated!