I think you have some cute content here. I particularly like the little run at :23 . I think something that would have helped this song a lot is a little drums. It has a very bouncy feel that would lend itself well to some simple rhythm addition. This is furthered by the huge cymbal crashes you use (which are a tad high in the mix) which beckon at your access to drums. Otherwise, I liked where you were going with this song- it would be nice in a level-up screen or something of the like.
i didn't add drums because i couldn't find good drums on fl studio
(i deleted the default set by accident and i didn't want to remake this song)
and your music is really good
what program do you use for
"The town that lies between"
It's pretty good. I think you could build on it a little more though. Don't be afraid to change things up a bit. Keep at it
i'll try to make a better song
Not Bad, just couldve used a bit of a more cooler rythm.