When the beginning kicked in, I thought that the song was going to be very low quality... you should have thrown in a phone effect on the master channel instead, for more of a dramatc 'boom' into the main part. It would be also if you had synths playing in the beginning.
The drums sound good, but the bass is pretty awkward... it moves too much. Drum n bass is all about being phat and rythymic. Try coming up with a groovy bass pattern, and keep that pattern going.
Good work, but could be improved on quite a bit =)
Keep it up! Check out my music sometime?
lol what is a phone effect? i know i still suck at basses hehe i made this one in half an hour :P
glad u liked it :)