The acoustic guitar really sticks to the ears and really nice quality.
The lyrics are pretty good and heartfelt my only complain is this sentence "and white like teeth" sounds a bit off regarding the rest of the song i think.
Your vocals have some obvious flaws but im not gonna go there since you said it all by yourself about your singing, what i am going to say however is that much of the "out of tune" parts you have there can be fixed by having more confidence in what you sing, its not easy i know but keep practicing until you are lot afraid to let your throat go.
Overall its a nice little song, very simple in the guitar and melody but its nice to listen to.
glad to see that you liked it, and i see if i have more confidence in my voice i could sing better, but i recorded this at 1 in the morning and i didnt want to wake anyone, and I actually like "white like teeth" but i can see why you hate it... The line I hate the most though is "Tight as hell" probably because the same reason you dont like "White like teeth"....thank you for your comment :D
i think its kinda sweet. it doesnt matter if your a good singer if you sing it to a girl that likes you she will melt. that set aside were you playing guitar and singing at the same time? if you were try singing to the music and then layering it you can do that with audacity and thats free.all together its rather simple and repetitive but sometimes thats what works
I did make this for a girl indirectly, im sorta in the friendzone at the second with this girl that i really like that is dating my best friend...
...but anyways, i layered it. I tried to do it with both voice and guitar, but my voice was faded in the background so i decided to sing it to the mic...i use mixcraft 5 btw, i do have audacity but i like mixcraft better for some reason...thank you for the response :D
Fucking love it man.
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