Awesome way to start it, and it built up really nicely! I think it's definitely the workings of a talented individual. The way the Bass was used as well really helped to make it a good tune
I appreciate the love mate!
lots of potential, try layering the bass lines, like a bunch, slightly different octaves, that should give a richer harmony in the bass
your composition is definitely there, i feel like the "heaviness" you refer to has to do with mixing and mastering. i know a BIT about mastering so i'll download this, master it, then PM you the results and see if it's what your looking for.
Very nice. It doesn't have that density to it that the pros seem to have, but I'm sure that all of us have the same problem. You are pretty close though!
As has been mentioned before, I think the chiptune instrument would either work out great if you used it for a melody. Of course, it would have to match the wobbles, but that's for you to figure :)
Keep it up.
Glad you enjoyed it!
awesome man. would you like to collab maybe? im pretty sure i can do heavy..but i cant do shit like this haha.
I'm open to a collab. Send me some ideas, I'll play around with them and let you know.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.