Ghaaaagghhh, this is one of my favorite Zelda songs of all time. It's a simple, short loop, but so emotional and moving at the same time. I'm glad people remix this song as often as they do. It doesn't take a lot to make this song pierce my heart and give me an overwhelming feeling of, well, I dunno. But something definitely happens every time I listen to this song.
As for your remix, it nails exactly what it should: Simple, calming, moving and emotional. I believe this is extremely successful. I've had it on loop for the past 10 minutes. It's just too pretty! :D