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Jan 22, 2013 | 3:09 AM EST
File Info
4.4 MB
3 min 54 sec
0 / 5.00

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Rated 0 / 5 stars
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389 Plays | 12 Downloads
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Electronic - House

Author Comments

First audio submission to Newgrounds, made using FL.

Let me know what you think!



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Hohkay. Initiating review.

The Good:
-Nice synth in the intro.
-Your drum pattern is alright.
-This has surprisingly good mixing for a first audio submission.

The Not-So-Good:
-The part coming in at about 0:14 seems to be in a completely different key from the first instrument.
-0:42 - more random keys.
-Okay, I don't need to comment on each new part - none of the melodic parts are in the same key. The part at 0:14 is also drowned out about halfway through.
-This is also extremely repetitive, it barely changes at all. The same pattern that there was in the beginning goes throughout the whole thing.

Overall: This is... eh. It's alright, I suppose. The main two issues with it are (A) repetition and (B) off-key notes galore. I'd suggest looking up some music theory and attempting a few scales. Otherwise, it's good. Good luck in the future!

-Review Request Club-

MysteriousPiF responds:

Thanks for the review sir!

Working on the key change issues