I definitely dig you style man. I like the progressive speed and you are doing fine by me with that bass. Maybe a bit of a different tone to offset the drop. I don't know I'm still new but much respect on your work.

The sounds ar weak but the structure is much an much better than mines

Its Pretty Good What program did you use?

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Your melodic and harmonic synths are unique and awesome, you need to focus on percussion and progressions. The intro progression is very house-like and mostly percussion based. There also needs to be a re-occurring hook that the listener can catch on it. Also, try out some automation, the kick in the beginning is way to loud compared to anything else. Try to use a real kick sample instead of a synthesized one, it makes for a better non-trance vibe. You have it, but music takes practice and time just like anything else. Listen to tons of dubstep/electro-house, it's the best way to understand song structure and dynamic range.