The intro was smooth and dreamy, but I think you use those fade-in and fade-out beginnings/ endings a lot. Maybe you could vary that a little. I liked how it was so bassy and catchy. A little repetitive, and, personally, progressive trance isn't my favorite genre, but i felt this one! I like what you did with the instrument at 1:35. It flowed really well. It's emotional and it has form, both of which I love in trance! It's not really my style, but as far as I'm concerned, this could be front page material! Great job! :)
LOL, what kind of beginnings/endings would you like to hear :3? I liked that you liked my effect thing at 1:35, that was a little trick I learned from Deadmau5, with the cutoffs and watchamacallits...
This melody of this song was from this song:
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I did a little modifications to the melody and did my own pattern, I really liked the melody and I need that melody out of my head :P
(btw, i didn't use headphones while making this cuz im grounded)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.