Hey.
The beginning is very powerful and attractive, so no complaints. Thats the prpose of trance songs, it so get your attention in the first few seconds of the song so you want to hear the rest. You have executed that perfectly.
I would have liked to hear a big synth/drum drop when the bass synth comes in. And, to be honest, I hear that bass synth EVERYWHERE, its not very original. Try making your own, maybe?
The song just finished, and I noticed that there was no real finishing of the percussion? There was no special drum stabs, no special anything, really. Just, a kick, with a heavy ride(?). You need open hi hats, claps, drum/snare rolls, big fancy things. Not just kick drops for 4 beats.
When you brought in the bass synth, I liked the backing that the main lead provides when it stutters. But the notes don't finish. It goes 'high-high-high' (not quite in that pattern, but you get it) but it just keeps... playing that over and over? =/ It would sound so awesome if you made this song more diverse, like, after 12 beats, on the 12 to the 16th beats, you could have had the drums do a break and have the synth do a huge finish-off. Like, instead of 'high high high' it could go 'high low medium' (thats refering to the pitch of the notes).
So, in all reality, this song is very professional sounding, and I like it. It just needs to be more diverse, with MUCH more effort. Not saying there wasn't lots put it in initially.
Good work, keep it up! Check out my music sometime?