Could be louder
Well this was notbad actually it's a pretty decent piece if you ask me but the sound quality was a bit low maybe it was the mic but you should also have better build ups and a few fade outs I like the style and hope you reproduce this with an even more powerfull force of sounds it's a good track and want to hear more from you
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a more powerful sound and maybe clean up the sound quality
This is very good. I hope you do continue on with this.
Nice and ambient, though maybe a bit bland. The melody itself sounds nice, but somehow it doesn't really glow, maybe the recording quality is just a bit crappy. I'd be happy to hear this with cleaner sound, would be a whole new experience! keep it going!
I'm sorry I couldn't sway you with this. The reason the 'recording' quality is bad is because it was never recorded. I composed it at the piano straight onto the computer. Everything you hear being played in the piece is what's called 'midi' sound which is pretend instruments. That's also probably why it feels expressionless. Cheers for the review.
I like the emotion, and the string-piano combo really helps you bring out that emotion. I also like how you slowed it down towards the end- makes me feel sad/sleepy (in a good way). However, I didn't think you needed that drum in there. It didn't really add anything to the piece in my opinion, and maybe even detracted from the emotional quality. Overall, a great soothing, emotional piece. :) This is why I wish there was more classical music on NG. :)
Cheers man. The drum is in there because the first minute is a commission and she specifically asked for it (notice how I put it in as little as possible). Thanks very much and I hope to have more soon
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.