This is a nice sounding track. You've got a lot of variety in the synths. The intro has that great bass, but to be honest, the drums that follow don't really appeal to me. I know your background is in rock, but I think a straight 4*4 electronic beat would make the track sound better, with a snare on the 2 and the 4, instead of the pattern you've got now.
There's some good harmonizations and everything works together well (possibly not the choir sample, a bit cheesy :P), just the beat lets it down a little bit I think.
Keep going, its good to see you try some more techno.